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Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Wow what a journey! You’re so gifted in your own style. Love it!

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What begins like a nursery rhyme gradually reveals something much darker. The contrast between innocence and disillusionment gives this poem its quiet power.

Keith's avatar

If we could toss away thoughts like a doll can change clothes

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

the structure of this is super cool. darkness so well done

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Ooh well done metaphor has a creepy edge to it! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

The Secret Ingredient's avatar

Memories and nostalgia so much deep symbolism

Nick Hills's avatar

Wonderful work Krissy, I love it! Have a beautiful day!

Laura K's avatar

Wow, Krissy. What a hauntingly beautiful piece.